Beautifully written
I love it !
why so depressed?

BP are initials for bipolar. Depression isn't exactly avoidable knowing that you have very little control over you mood everyday, you can shift back and forth in moods faster than lightning can strike. No treatments can nullify that, short of medicating some one so much they're basically a vegetable, and even then there's no way of knowing if they still feel like that. You're torn between yourself, between mania and depression.

I'm glad you liked it, and I'm sorry if that statement bothered you at all. Thanks for the comment and the +fav, btw

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Tears of crimson sweet,
Blood of warriors in defeat,
A battle long since lost,
Death is failure's cost.
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Rosy lips soft as velvet,
Yet such a shallow soul.
A love to forget,
With a heart as black as coal.

Nice piece; very emotional indeed.

Bravo!

Its works you do like this that I really like =] It reminds me of so much. I write somethings sometime, but idk where to put it. And sometimes I just rip it up from venting o.o..

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"Eagle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" "I told you It wouldn't make me dizzy!" -CRASH- @.@...

Thanks. And yeah, it was writ out of emotional overflow, so it should be emotional.

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Tears of crimson sweet,
Blood of warriors in defeat,
A battle long since lost,
Death is failure's cost.
---
Rosy lips soft as velvet,
Yet such a shallow soul.
A love to forget,
With a heart as black as coal.

Thank you. I usually do write to vent like that, other times it's just inspiration.

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Tears of crimson sweet,
Blood of warriors in defeat,
A battle long since lost,
Death is failure's cost.
---
Rosy lips soft as velvet,
Yet such a shallow soul.
A love to forget,
With a heart as black as coal.

=OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddd!!!!!!!!!

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More than words..

Which is never a bad thing.

You're welcome^^

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"Eagle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" "I told you It wouldn't make me dizzy!" -CRASH- @.@...