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BP- Winding Down by ~Sheltari:iconSheltari:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Fixed


Outcast at birth, no choice in the matter
A world of love and hate, yet I feel only the latter.
Fighting to obtain my glimmer of peace
But whenever I grab it, I have to release.

The world's insanity is dragging me down
Stuck so long in this chaos I'm starting to drown.
With no rest for my mind
No respite for my spirit,
I'm running from life and already fear it.

Oppressed when all others are free,
Not even a shred of hope at all for me.
Body's broken, bruised, bloody and torn
Soul is shattered, scattered, shredded and worn.
No fighting chance so i have to flee;
Why is life killing me?
©2007-2008 ~Sheltari
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"Well I try to make you proud,
But for crying out loud,
Give me a chance to hide away.
Exhaustion takes over;
Will this some day be over?" - He - By Jars of Clay
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~SILLY-BILLY-J3SSIC4:iconSILLY-BILLY-J3SSIC4: Dec 25, 2007, 6:34:57 PM
Beautifully written
I love it !
why so depressed?
~Sheltari:iconSheltari: Dec 25, 2007, 7:11:49 PM
BP are initials for bipolar. Depression isn't exactly avoidable knowing that you have very little control over you mood everyday, you can shift back and forth in moods faster than lightning can strike. No treatments can nullify that, short of medicating some one so much they're basically a vegetable, and even then there's no way of knowing if they still feel like that. You're torn between yourself, between mania and depression.

I'm glad you liked it, and I'm sorry if that statement bothered you at all. Thanks for the comment and the +fav, btw

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Tears of crimson sweet,
Blood of warriors in defeat,
A battle long since lost,
Death is failure's cost.
---
Rosy lips soft as velvet,
Yet such a shallow soul.
A love to forget,
With a heart as black as coal.
=ghbatt:iconghbatt: Dec 25, 2007, 8:16:14 PM
Nice piece; very emotional indeed. :(

Bravo!
~CrimsonAngelTears:iconCrimsonAngelTears: Dec 26, 2007, 12:17:26 AM
Its works you do like this that I really like =] It reminds me of so much. I write somethings sometime, but idk where to put it. And sometimes I just rip it up from venting o.o..

--
*Queen Of Fantasy*
I Shall Grant Your Wishes.
~Sheltari:iconSheltari: Dec 26, 2007, 1:36:21 AM
Thanks. And yeah, it was writ out of emotional overflow, so it should be emotional. :shrug:

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Tears of crimson sweet,
Blood of warriors in defeat,
A battle long since lost,
Death is failure's cost.
---
Rosy lips soft as velvet,
Yet such a shallow soul.
A love to forget,
With a heart as black as coal.
~Sheltari:iconSheltari: Dec 26, 2007, 1:38:12 AM
Thank you. I usually do write to vent like that, other times it's just inspiration.

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Tears of crimson sweet,
Blood of warriors in defeat,
A battle long since lost,
Death is failure's cost.
---
Rosy lips soft as velvet,
Yet such a shallow soul.
A love to forget,
With a heart as black as coal.
*redvelvetroses:iconredvelvetroses: Dec 26, 2007, 4:47:55 AM
=OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddd!!!!!!!!!

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More than words..
=ghbatt:iconghbatt: Dec 26, 2007, 7:51:55 AM
Which is never a bad thing. :)
~CrimsonAngelTears:iconCrimsonAngelTears: Dec 26, 2007, 12:12:29 PM
You're welcome^^

--
*Queen Of Fantasy*
I Shall Grant Your Wishes.
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